2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

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Nowadays,there is a fact that many shopping with excessive packaging developing more and more heavy.It can be saw in any where now.Why it can develop such a quitely?Becase shopping that excessive packaging can trract many people attaction to the shopping so that crease possible that it will be burougt.A other hand ,people think it that shopping with excessive packaging can make itself more better. For above the fact ,I think it is bad action that shopping with excessive packaging.becase it will use much resoure that not factive using in a same shopping.If all shopping will be made like above .And our country's resoure will not enough to use in the fueure.So I think shopping should is made with fit resoure,becase it can save many resoure can't be useless.Let we go to refusing it that shopping with excessive packaging and making a beautful country.