2009年12月英语六级作文真题:送孩子参加艺术班

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Nowadays,the view on whether should parents send kids to art classes varys from person to person.some individuals held the idea that kids should be sent to art classes,which will set a valid foundation in their future.what is more?It is goes without saying that it will make the kid more creative if they participate in art classes.however,others are convinced that sending their kid to art classes will bring more pressure to kid and it will not do good to their development. As far as I am concerned.sending kids to art classes will help children to develop their creation and talent on the condition that kids enjoy the art learning. only children are enjoyable can they will pay more attention to their favors