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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;可适当增加从句的使用,注意文中的一些小错误;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。

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Education pays is have creasing with education degree. This is picture about education pays in 2011, education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates. Education pays data are for person age 25 and over. earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers because of picture that a person with education degree over and over creasing how he/she should most earnings. The less than high school diploma is lowest:the first, it is regular of china and the children are pay deep. The second, the children need not. The high school diploma to associate degree a little float. The most pays are professional degree from the Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey. In total,education pay is descending from junior to high grade.

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