2004年1月英语六级作文真题:浪费现象

文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

It's a common phenomenon that waste on compus goes from bad to worse.Waste can be seen in everywhere in the compus. A lot of food uneaten is thrown in the dust bin,a great deal of water is not drunk out and ect. As we all know,it is out of question that waste will have a bad influence on the development of the compus ,the society and even the country.Obviously,waste will make the students to develop the fault value and mislead them to develop themselves.What is more?the much we waste,the less resource will be. In order to stop the spread of the waste in the compus,I think every member in the compus should pay their effort .On our daily life ,Not only should we try our best to avoid waste,but also we should try to persuade our roommates,classmates not to waste.