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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:沟通的意义

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:28浏览次数:13018
要求:

题目要求:

围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分84.0分
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学术词汇需要继续积累,单词拼写不错;可适当增加复合句和从句的使用;衔接词和过渡词用的很不错。

用户练习作文:

As its show above,in the middle of the picture is an old man who laid in the ground,around him stand amount of people .Incredibly ,none of them give a hand to him.Simple as the picture is ,a certain informative meaning is revealed in it. The picture above warns us that the serious social problem is around us in China.The news in the internet,television,newspaper and his like often show us that a warm hearted fellow who helped the one that need assistance,in the end,the one who got assistance said that the person who helped him is the fellow who hurt him.The person who give a hand to other will feel very sad when he sound those words.As the same thing be reported to the public too much,people will think twice before he take action to give assistance to these who need help.The more harm,the more indifference. To my best understanding,many section of the social should responsible for this situation.In order to make our society more harmony and warm,several measures should be taken to reverse the worrying trend.First,the government should reward the people who helped others,not only in material but also in mental.Second,schools and teachers should teach pupils,especially the youngsters,that help people who need help is a Chinese traditional virtue.

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