Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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As what is vividly shown in the picture, a teacher is teaching her pupils to deal with arithmetic questions. One children asked "No offense, but by the time we're in the job market, won't that stuff be outdate ". What has been described in the cartoon carries great implication for our life, it's not important to basis skills. They think basic skills will be outdated when they are in the job market. But as far as I am concerned, it's vital. For example, the buildings are made with many basic stuffs. Every one of stuffs is basic and vital. If someone is lost that the building would destroy. What's more, the basic skill will be more useful. To sum up, insignificant and boring as learning basic skills may seem , it is actually of great importance and should not be neglected.