2007年高考英语作文真题(陕西卷):写英文稿件

采用了一些简单的从句；文中词汇表达较为丰富准确，但存在单词拼写错误；不能熟练使用过渡词，文章结构不严谨；可以适当增加副词的使用。

Lora take adventage of him summer to have a part time job.She thinks it is a good chance to exercise self and can know about the society better.Also she may get money to buy what she wants do her own money.And it can recognize herself and know the parents hard work. while lora,s parents disagree her decision.Owing to she is too young to kook after herself.And it can be cheated if the company is bad . In my opinion, iam delight to see lora is learn the parents hard work.I am support her did .Although she mau have difficulties to do the part time job,I have confident if she wants to do it,just do it.And it can get socialexperience.