2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

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Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will How to succeed has become a hot topic among people.Now that succeed is so important,what should we do? As a student,study is our primary duty,we need knowledge to strong our mind,in this case,we won't be talent if we do not study hard.A strong will is the root of any goal we are longing for,it is the guarantee of succeed as well. From what has been discussed above, we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that nothing succeeds without a strong will.