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Memo To ,Mary Chen From,Liming Date,in 23th Deverber 2008 I will go out of the work for a week in Beijing.Because of it,I wouldn't demate that company will hold a party in yuandan with your.It's the time for you to do it.Please you tell me the party decide on time , place and the need of the somethings. Thank you!
