2006年6月英语六级作文真题:关于旅游

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Now days ,more and more people like to go out for a trip,so do I.In my opinion ,traveling is a good way to relax ourselves.We can find ourselves when we go out.With the economic developing people have more money to spend on traveling.we like traveling very much.many people choose to go out to relax