邢台二中2012―2013学年上学期高二年级期末测试试卷英语作文

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How to improve school safety As all we known,There are many campus' accident about violence in 2010.It shocked us and think over the safety of school.And there are some advice is about improve school safety. First,we should tell students some opinin that is what should do and what is mustn't.Second,we have to teach students how to save themselves.It's important that students know how to do could take away the dangerous.Next,wo should make a safe environment . For example,we can take on many security guards to protect students.Finally,we should pay attention to all of unsafe factor as well.In a ward,wo will protect each students far away the dangerous as possible as we can. Only can we do,the violence's accident will far away. Let us protect our flowers which is our children together.