拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;可适当增加文中长句和复杂句的使用;衔接词和过渡词用的很不错。
A survey,carried out by Beijing,showed that 67 percent of students hold the view that saving money is a good habit ;Whereas the others firmly believe that using tomorrow's money today is better.From my point of view,I am in favor of the previous opinion.The reasons are as follows. Firstly,we students have no jobs or other means to make money , as a result of which we have to turn to our parents .In no case should we take it for granted.Secondly,It is a virtue for the Chinese to save ,as well as a good habit we should develop.We must develop good habits since we are young and that is just what makes us confident to say we are Chinese.Lastly,maybe we can earn a large amount of money later,but no one can predict the future.If you run out of the majority of your money today,you will have to worry about whether you have enough money to live through tomorrow.It is quite unnecessary and unwise . To sum up,we should develop the habit of saving money and it is not feasible to use tomorrow's money today.Let's begin to save money from now on.