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2005年6月英语六级作文真题:关于盗版

发布时间:2013-05-14 23:28浏览次数:1055
要求:
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Say No to Pirated Products. You should write at Least 150 words following the outline given below: 
1. 目前盗版的现象比较严重 
2. 造成这种现象的原因及危害 
3. 我们应该怎么做
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有效地采用了多种衔接方法,层次清晰;句式变化多样;文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

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With the development of technology,more and more pirates are coming out.What is very unfair to the companies who made genuine,and it is harmful to the society. The reason why these pirates come out because:First,the pirates are cheaper than genuine,and will cost less than genuine,too.Second,people always like buy cheap things,and they think no matter what they are--genuine or pirate,just the same to them,and they won't buy the expensive,on the contrary,they always choose the cheap one instead.And the third,whatever pirate or genuine,like books or videos,when we read or watch it over,then we probably won't need them,so why not buy the cheap,and we don't care about it if it is pirate or genuine. As above,we should do something to conceal it,any way,it is not a right thing to buy a pirate books or videos.So we should make up our mind to avoid it,and to tell our friends and relatives to avoid it,too.You know,the pirates are illegal all around the world,so we should obey the law,and to avoid doing the wrong thing.

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