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With the development of technology,more and more pirates are coming out.It is very unfair to genuine,and it is harmful to the society. The reason why pirates come out is because:First,the pirates are cheaper,and they will cost less,too.Second,people always like buy cheap things,and they think no matter what they are--genuine or pirate,just the same to them,and they won't buy the expensive,on the contrary,they always choose the cheap one instead.And the third,whatever pirate or genuine,like books or videos,when we read or watch it over,then we probably won't need them,so why not buy the cheap,and we don't care about it if it is pirate or genuine. As above,we should do something to conceal it,any way,it is not a right thing to buy a pirate books or videos.So we should make up our mind to avoid it,and to tell our friends and relatives to avoid it,too.You know,the pirates are illegal all around the world,so we should obey the law,and to avoid doing the wrong thing.
