题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;复杂句使用不错,句法规范;文章词汇丰富度较好,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活。
As a response to the soaring economy and enlightened society,recent few years have witnessed a complex relationship between the man and the computers which seems to be thought-provoking.There's no doubt that it should be given deep consideration. In my judgment,although the computer may have incredible intelligence and can take the place of human labor in many fields,it is unlikely that it will take the place of man someday.A computer has no independent thinking,and therefore it can never really think like man. However,with the frequent use of,and the increasing relince on,the computer,there is indeed a danger that some people may think and act the same way as the computer which is programmed.They mayn lose the ability to think critically and reactively,and eventually develop some "programmed routine" in their behavior,neglecting the rich subtleties of human feelings and emotions. Therefore,while making good use of the computer,we should always bear in mind that it is only a useful tool for us,and that we can always think of better and more hunane ways of coping with our needs or problems.