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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17423
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分81.5分
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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;作者英语功底扎实,可适当调整文中从句数量;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。

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With the development of computer industry and artifical intelligence,computer has undenied taken place of human in some areas and begin to think like man.So many people are concerned that the computer will pose a new challenge to human.And in my opinion,it is really a danger that man will begin to think like computer. Nowadays, with the increasing reliance on the computer,many people gradually lose the ability of thinking critically and flexibly.They begin to think the same way as the computer,which is dangerous to the advancement of the society.Besides,many people spend so long in front of the cold screen that they have little time communicating and interacting with people in real life.As time goes by,they become poker-faced,acting just like a machine,which will harm the development of human as a social creature. To avoid thinking like the computer,we should reduce our heavy dependence on it,and should always keep in mind that a computer is only a useful tool,and that we can always think of better and more humane ways of coping with our needs or problems by ourselves.

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