2005年6月英语六级作文真题:关于盗版

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Say no to pirated products Nowadays,we can see many pirated products everywhere,the phonomen is very seresily.There are no waves without wind ,many pirated products producted just because the reality products are too expensive ,but, most pirated products is unsafe,due to it used some hamerful things. When we meet pirated products ,we ought to say no,and ask some official department to slove those problem.