作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文中使用了简单的连接词和过渡词;文中词汇较灵活,但要注意积累学术词汇,拼写错误也要注意;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。
Nowadays,more and more scholars don't pay attention to English spelling.but it is not good for scholars to learn English.The reasons can be listed as follows,on the one hand,with the development of science and technology,a number of scholars use the software,such as youdao dictionary,when they can't spell the words.On the other hand,scholars don't have a beter gaspe for spelling's skill. As far as Iam concerned,spelling is playing an essential role in English.First of all,we should memorize ten or twenty words'spelling per day and put it to use whenever possible.Secondly,schools should hold some activities for scholars which is about spelling.Last but not least,teachers should recommend some skills about spelling. However only in this way can we really learn well in spelling.