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Nowadays,more and more scholars don't pay attention to spelling.The reasons can be listed as follows,on the one hand,with the development of science and technology,a number of scholars use the software,such as youdao dictionary,when they can't spell the words.On the other hand,scholars don't have a better gaspe for spelling's skill. As far as I am concerned,spelling is playing an essential role in English.First of all,we should memorize ten or twenty words' spelling per day .Secondly,schools should hold some activities which is about spelling activity for scholars .Last but not least,teachers should find some skills about spelling to scholars. However only in this way can we really learn well in spelling.