2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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At present,more and more people like Online Shopping,and it become popular. There are several advantages about Online Shopping.At first,it is convenient for us to buy something what we need.Because we can do it at home.What's more,online shopping often cheaper than shopping.So we can save some money.On the other hand,it also have many questions. we can't see the things on line ,so we don't know this things is good or bad. In my point of view,some things we can buy on line,but not everything we buy on line.