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文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用。
Nowadays, with the increasing number of the children depend on their parents due to the fact that parents prepare everything for them in daily lfe, so that most of the children today can be really independent without parents. For example, parents would prepare for them when they begin to go to school or they will do in the future.Such as eating、sleeping、dressing and so on. Perhaps they will not rely on their parents until they have their own family. Inorder to raise the independence to their children, not only should the parents give the zone for them to adjust, but also let them make a plan which is about their life. What's more, parents have to observe them and teach them lessons through what they did.
