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Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will A strong will is important, it can you success . Many great scientists realy on a will, which make them succeed .There is a saying says that where there is a will , there is a way With a strong will ,a person can do great things and finish them beautifully, Even if they can face on many difficulties ,a strong will can help them go out troubles .So are the studen -ts ,we should work hard ,and we can become a useful person for our country . Last but not last ,a strong will lead to success.