2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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Computer and man Computer plays an important part in our daily life.It affect everyone's life,changing our custom .Between the computer and man has some connections,which is good or bad affect,it's worth everyone to think. Computer has some good affect,first of all,it can extend our understand of world;next,it can let us in time to know the things which happend in our world;at last,it can help us study or work in the Intert,which can reduce the time to do more things. Indeed,between computer and man ,computer bring to man some good effects.But, it also has some bad effects need us to take serious.Fisrt,in the communication,everyone always put theirself into it,let everyone live in a dramical world,ingore the comunicate to their friend.Second,it let some young child wallow in the Internt,so that ingore their study.last,many things we can do it in the Internet,many people always take a lot of time in it ,which can effect their health. If we use computer well,computer and man will take a good connecte between it.