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2005年6月18日英语四级作文真题:教师节

发布时间:2013-05-17 00:23浏览次数:1113
要求:
Teacher‟s Day :    
1. 向老师致以节日的问候。   
2. 回忆件老师的教诲中难忘的事情。   
3. 我如何报答老师。
用户的作文(系统评分73.0分
评语:

拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;从句使用很不错,再接再厉;上下文衔接稍显不流畅。

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We all have the best willing for our teachers on the Teachers' Day.Teachers are the engineers of our mental.They teach us learning knowledge,help us to settle out the problems which we meet on our way to success,whatever problems on living or studying. My most impressed thing about my high school teacher was that I acquired most help from him because I attended a boarding school which was far away from my home,so I rarely went back home and my teacher was also my friend and relative.When I had problems with studying,he would firstly let me resolve it by myself,if I tried my best to solve it,he would motivate me,if I still couldn't do it alone,he would help me work out it.When I had a sick,he would take me to the hospital and bought pills for me,if I lost lessons,he would also help me make up them if he had time.I really appreciate him with the things he did for me,and I will remember his goodness for a long time. I will try my best to study hard to get a good job and have a good future to return what he did for me.

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