2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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Computer and Man As we all known,with the development of the society ,computers are becoming an important part of our everyday life .Computer and man has become close .We deal with our works and study by computers .We can get what news that we want thought computers.What's more , we can watch programs at any times we want .According to that ,i can say computers make our life more convenient and colorful .But every coin has two sides ,computers also bring us some trouble .One problem is that many students are abandon their study because of addicting to computer games .Besides we are too rely on computers when we meet problems ,we used to surfer the Internet instead thinking ourselves . So man invented the computer and computer changed our life ,but computers cannot replace human .