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2001年6月英语四级作文真题:给同学写关于度假的信件

发布时间:2013-05-14 18:43浏览次数:1411
要求:
 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter. Suppose you are Zhang Ying. Write a letter to Xiao Wang, a schoolmate of yours who is going to visit you during the weeklong holiday. You should write at least 100 words according to the suggestions (given in Chinese) below:
  1.表示欢迎
  2.提出度假安排建议
  3.提醒应注意的事项
  A Letter to A Schoolmate; June 23, 2001; Dear Xiao Wang; Yours, Zhang Ying
用户的作文(系统评分70.5分
评语:

请作者增加学术词汇的使用,不过单词拼写做的很好;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。

用户练习作文:

June 23, 2001 Dear Xiao Wang,   I am glad to hear that you will come to see me during the weeklong holiday. It has been three years since we graduated from our university. I miss you very much. I even can’t wait to see you.   I’ve made a plan for this holiday. As this is the first time you come to Beijing, I think we’d better have sightseeing around it. We can visit some famous scenic spots and historical sites, such as Summer Palace, The Forbidden City, The Great Wall, etc. We can do some shopping together. There are many splendid markets and plazas in Beijing. The State Library is also a good place for us to go. By the way, since lots of people will go traveling in this holiday, it must be crowded on the train. So you should take care of your luggage. Bring more clothes with you because Beijing is much colder than Kunming at this time. And don’t forget to tell me when you will arrive. I’ll pick you up at the airport.   Miss you!   Yours,   Zhang Ying

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