2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

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On Excessive Packaging Now there is a problem exits at sales with excessive packaging. Why could it take part ? I think of benifts is a important reason ,The sale cargo people conside by excessive packaging to indirece the price.In this way ,they can get more money. In my conclution ,I think this kind of way is not good .It will