2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意个别句子错误；结构不严谨，几乎没有使用衔接词，上下文衔接欠流畅。

On Excessive Packaging Now there is a problem that exits at sales with excessive packaging. Why could it take part ? I think of benefits is a important reason ,The sale cargo people learn a way by excessive packaging to rise the price.In this way ,they can get more money. In my conclusion ,I think this kind of way is not good .It will make the consumers have more dress.Moreover,this way is a bad behavior.Of course,we also need some packaging to keep the cargo looked more comfortable.But excessive packaging will have great