题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
词汇表达较灵活准确,学术词汇使用过少,另外注意文中个别的拼写错误;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。
There is no doubt that we all have friends,but what's the most important things between friends,in a another world,what keeps the relationship,of course,the trust. As friends,only by trusting each other,can we know more about each other.Once trouble occurs,trust could beat anything,as the treat keep them toghther to solve the problem. Does trust only lies in friends?Of course not.Everyone in the world need trust.Citizens need to trust country,so that the society would be much harmony.Workers must trust their boss,so they could work harder to comform the company.Children have to trust their parents and teachers,or they would face many trouble.Even lovers would trust each other,which could made their family happier.As we can see,how important the trust is. But on the other hand,trust also based on honest.If one always treat other,how could others turst him. In the end,I have to say that we need others' trust,and we also would trust others in return.