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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

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题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

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文章词汇表达比较灵活,学术词汇的使用要继续加强;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。

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There is no doubt that we all have friends,but what's the most important things between friends,in another world,what keeps the relationship,of course,the trust. As friends,only by trusting each other,can we know more about each other.Once trouble occurs,trust could beat anything,as the treat keep them together to solve the problem. Does trust only lies in friends?Of course not.Everyone in the world needs trust.Citizens need to trust country,so that the society would be much harmony.Workers must trust their boss,so they could work harder to strengthen the company.Children have to trust their parents and teachers,or they would face many trouble.Even lovers would trust each other,which could made their family happier.As we can see,how important the trust is. But on the other hand,trust also based on honest.If one always cheat other,how could others trust him. In the end,I have to say that we need others' trust,and we would also trust others in return.

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