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2007年6月英语六级作文真题:学雷锋

发布时间:2013-05-14 23:47浏览次数:1092
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Should one expect a reward when doing a good deed 
1.有的人认为应该有回报 
2.另外的人认为应该象雷锋一样不要回报 
3.我的看法 
用户的作文(系统评分78.0分
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作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。

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Doing a good deed is always encouraged in current society.That not only shows the improvement of person's behaviour,but also claims the development of our society.There is a controvasial debate that whether one should expect a reward when doing a good deed. Some people are in favor of expecting a rewarding for doing a deed.The reasons are following.First,doing a good deed deserves a reward ,then expecting a reward is completely appropriate.Next,the reward they gained can encourage more such good behavior. On the contrary,some people believe that we should regard LeiFeng as our learning model,so neglecting the reward should be advocated.Besides,they may be a phenomenon that a person do a good deed in order to a reward. It is common that people from different background have various ideas.As far as I am concerned,the point is the behavior of doing a good deed.We should consider doing a good deed as our duty,then our society will be wonderful.

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