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The argument over whether one should expect a reward when doing a good deed is overwhelmingly heated.People vary from one another in their opinions.Some people are of the opinion that there should be a reward for a good deed.They are in favor of this idea because they think by this,people can be encouraged to help others.Moreover,they maintain that a good deed should be valued properly and reasonably by a reward in this utilitarian and materialistic world. On the contraty,the majority of people claim that we should learn from Lei Feng,who helped others without any expectation of rewards.They assume that people do a good deed out of their free will and based on their sense of responsibility.What's more,conducting good deeds is the fulfillment of one's value,so a reward is of minimal significance.Actually,the biggest reward is the inner peace and satisfaction you get from what you have done. As far as I am concerned,it's a basic requirement for everone to conduct a good deed without epecting any rewards. What matters is that we take the initiative to help those who are in need.For one thing,it is crucial that the society create an atmosphere in which doing good is a virtue.For another,it is necessary that the government try its best to encourage people to do good deed.And it is also important for all of us to realize that we obtain much enjoyment and spiritual enhancement by helping others.
