题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者句法基本功不错,可适当增加从句的使用;作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间。
As a response to the soaring economy and the enlightened society,recent few years have witnessed a complex relationship between the man and the computers which seems to be thought-provoking.There's no doubt that it should be given deep consideration. In my judgment,although the computer may have incredible intelligence and can take the place of human labor in many fields,it is unlikely that it will take the place of man someday.A computer has no independent thinking,and therefore it can never really think like the man. However,with the frequent use of,and the increasing relince on,the computer,there is indeed a danger that some people may think and act the same way as the computer which is programmed.They may lose the ability to think critically and reactively,and eventually develop some "programmed routine" in their behavior,neglecting the rich feelings . Therefore,while making good use of the computer,we should always bear in mind that it is only a useful tool for us,and that we can always think of better and more humane ways of coping with our needs.