作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;能较灵活地使用部分学术词汇,有基础拼写错误,需要注意一下;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。
There is a controvasial debate that whether one should expect a reward when doing a good deed. Some people are in favor of expecting a rewarding for doing a deed.The reasons are following.First,doing a good deed deserves a reward ,then expecting a reward is completely appropriate.Next,the reward they gained can encourage more such good behavior. On the contrary,some people believe that we should regard LeiFeng as our learning model,so neglecting the reward should be advocated.Besides,they may be a phenomenon that a person do a good deed in order to a reward. It is common that people from different background have various ideas.As far as I am concerned,the point is the behavior of doing a good deed.We should consider doing a good deed as our duty,then our society will be wonderful. People from different background have various ideas.