2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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Nowadays online shopping becomes more and more fashionable.It has advantages and disadvantages.Of course,online shopping makes our life more convience. But it exits too much unknown.such as the quality of goods,the consumers cannot know the actually phenomena. In my conclusion,Try the following measures to solute its disadvantages,set some policy to restrict the bad parts of online shopping.