2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

作者学术词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累；作者句法知识不够扎实，从句也偏少；衔接成分偏少；连词使用偏少；可以适当增加副词的使用；请注意分段。

the future of medicine we can not deny the fact that poor doctor-patient relationship has sparked an extensive debate over this years.The model of medicine is becoming a hot topic among people,which plays a guiding and fundamental role in creating a harmonious healthcare environment . as the development of economy ,modern science has transformed its shapes from biology science to bio-psycho-social medicine model