2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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Nowadays,the Online Shopping becomes more and more popular in people's life.It has already been regarded the newest tend in society. There are many advantages of Online Shopping.Such as,it can save time for the customers and it's convenient for both the merchants and the consumers.However,every coins have two sides.There's also some problems in Online Shopping.For so many people shopping online,there have been many false shops online.Merchants of these shops sell bad goods to consumers and have no rights for the consumer to identify with them. In my point of views,the merchant's behaviors are not good for Online Shopping's development.And their deeds are illegal.I advise the department be related to it solve this problem in high-quality.