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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第38篇: 学生学习历史和文学是否比学习科学和数学更重要

发布时间:2013-08-16 16:48浏览次数:4088
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

It is more important for students to study history and literature than it is for them to study science and mathematics.

Use specific reasons to support your opinion.

学生学习历史和文学是否比学习科学和数学更重要。你的观点是?并给出原因。

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Some people claim that students should spend more time studying history and literature than studying science and mathematics, since they are helpful to enhance the emotional development. But in fact, as basic courses, they are equally important for students to get a versatile education. Admittedly, studying history and literature has numerous benefits. History is a mirror, through which, we reflect us, draw the lessons and lead us to choose the optimum way to develop. For example, Japanese 731 bases, located in Pingfang district, Harbin, China, is the headquarter of 731 army, where more than 3000 thousand people died in due to the human experiments holded by Japanese, the victims even include the children. Learning about this further strengthen our confidence to preserve the peace and against the fascist crimes. Thus, it's crucial to pay close attention to study history and literature. However, when emphasizing the important of studying history and literature, we should not neglect that sciences and mathematics are playing an essential role in our daily life. The electric equipment such as electric chairs and elevators has substantially enhance the self-sufficiency of the disabled; the washing machine, vaccum cleaner have considerably reduced the workload of housewife; and adopting cutting-edge technology in the industries has remarkably argument the productivity. Actually, sciences and mathematics are the most contributors to current innovation. For this, how can you ignore the importantance of studying science and mathematics? In conclusion, there is nothing wrong with studying history and literature. the studying of science and mathematics, however, should be considered equally.

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