2009年12月英语四级作文真题:建设绿色校园

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Create a beautiful and green college As a college student,with the development of economy and social's demand,we should learn more useful things,such as communication with friendly to each other we don't know,and create a green campus for us. In the four years college life,is a important process for every students.We eat ,sleeping and learning in there,no one want to live a bad evirnment.Therefore,we need a plan to build the buateful campus.First of all,we should appeal to all of the students pay attention to it,only in this way can everyone konw that it is important.Then,we need practice,for example,don't waste our every minute to do something without good results.Finally,we not emphase only to learn,but we also do a lot of activities to entertainment our tired body. A green campus means a good environment to study,whatever we lost,we need find it again.So let us to start build our beautiful campus.