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文章词汇使用较为恰当灵活，希望能更熟练地使用学术词汇文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词；熟练使用了一些长难句。
With the development of electronic technology and business,shopping online is becoming more and more popular and has become a fashion in the society. There is no doubt that the development of shopping online is progress of human society,for its advantages as following.For one hand,it make the circulation of the good's information more wider and fluent.For another hand,it drive the development of logistics industry therefore make a great contribution to the social economy.However,some disadvantages also exit when we enjoying ourselves on shopping online.Firstly,we may buy a lot of things that we don't need because we can see numerous goods on sold everyday as shopping online more and more convenience.Secondly,as we all know,internet itself is a tool that safe as well as unsafe,therefore we may get into the tricks on the internet easily if we haven't be carefully enough. As far as I am concerned,no matter how shopping online is convenience,we should be an economical person and set up a correct consumption concept.
