文中词汇表达较恰当,学术词汇表达灵活;作者句法知识扎实,但文中从句数量稍显不足;全文结构较为严谨。
In the decades years agao,people communicate with each other by writting letters or face to face.With the development of technology and artificial intelligence,there is a typical way of interpersonal communication,that is,by internet.Obviously,with the development of the internet,interpersonal communication have been impacted greatly. On one hand,the internet provides more convenient and interesting ways of communication,including blogs,emails,and instant messengers like QQ and MSN,which are increasingly welcomed.For example,in many schools,teachers send and receive the homework of students.In many companies,colleagues communicate with each other by sending instant messengers or holding video conferences. On the other hand,the internet has some negative impacted on interpersonal communication.Many people complain having lose face to face communicating skills.And people become indifference to each other. As the above mentioned,we can safely conclude that the internet is a double-edged sword for interpersonal communication.We should take full advantage of the convenience it brings,and meanwhile avoid being immerged in it too much.
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