字数:200满分:100分
作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;作者词汇量积累不错,一些学术词汇的使用比较灵活,有个别拼写错误;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
There are two players on the football field in the partten.The player who is seeking to get score feel the goalkeeper is too huge to hide the door behind him.But,at the same time,the goalkeeper thinks he will hardly keep the ball out of the door because he is so small. The picture conveys that we are more stronger than we imagine.It also account for a potential meaning that some people always underestimate their ability when they confront with challenges.These negative thoughts will damage their confidence and hopes,lead to the failture finally. There are amount of liveing proofs demonstrating the power of the positive thinkings.For instance,there is a fierce competition in the entrance exams for postgraduate from universities.It is not uncommon to find students with positive thinking excel in the exam eventually.Another case in point is Deng Yaping,the internationally famous athlete.She is very short,also becomes successful.Her strong will and efforts enable to her to win so many champions and respects from all over the world.