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拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；使用了部分简单的长难句，可适当增加一些复杂的长句；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨。
Today, internet is a dispensable part of people's life. As internet is becoming increasingly important in social operation, the influence of internet on people's life is hotly argued. There are two mainstream perspectives on internet. On the one hand, internet is often likened to the lubricant of society. Some people believe internet brings a significant improvement in efficiency in work as well as in studying. On the other hand, many people hold the view that cyber world is highly addictive among teenagers and thus affect their academic performance. In my opinion of view, internet is, figuratively speaking, a double-edged sword, we profit only by using it properly. For one thing, it is vital for us to be proficient in using internet as the internet age has arrived; For another, we need to reject temptations when travel in the cyber world.
