字数:200满分:100分
作者词汇基础扎实;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;全文结构较为严谨。
In the drawing there are two players on the football field.The player who is seeking to score feels too huge the goalkeeper is to hide the door behind him.Nonetheless,at the same time,the goalkeeper thinks he will hardly keep the ball out of the door because he is so small. The message conveyed in the picture seems to be that we are much stronger than imagin.What is true is that some persons always underestimate their ability when they confront with challenges.These negative thoughts will damage their confidence and hopes,lead to the failure finally. There are the amount of living proofs demonstrating the power of the positive ideas.For instance,there is a fierce competition in the entrance exams for postgraduate from universities.It is not uncommon to find students who keep positive attitude excel in the exam eventually.Another case in point is Deng Yaping,the internationally famous athlete.She is very short,also becomes successful.Her strong will and efforts enable to her to win so many champions and respects from all over the world.