字数:200满分:100分
作者词汇基础不错,在学术词汇的积累上还要再接再厉;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。
In the drawing there are two players on the football field.The player who is seeking to score feels too huge the goalkeeper is to hide the door behind him.Nonetheless,at the same time,the goalkeeper thinks he will hardly keep the ball out of the door because he is so small. The message conveyed in the picture seems to be that we are much stronger than imagine.What is true is that some persons always underestimate their ability when they confront with challenges.These negative thoughts will damage their confidence and hopes,lead to the failure finally. There are the amount of living proofs demonstrating the power of the positive ideas.For instance,there is a fierce competition in the entrance exams for postgraduate from universities.It is not uncommon to find students who are positive excel in the exam eventually.Another case in point is Deng Yaping,the internationally famous athlete.She is very dwarf,also becomes successful.Her strong will and efforts enable to her to win not only so many champions but also respects from all over the world.