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2003年专业四级英语作文真题:保持好心情

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:19浏览次数:3981
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题目 The importance of keeping a good mood.
说明 People in modern society live under a lot of pressure, from education, career, or family. So it is important for them to keep a good mood under whatever circumstances. Write on ANSWER SHEET ONE a composition of about 150 words on the following topic: The importance of keeping a good mood.
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:200满分:100分
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作者词汇基础不错,在学术词汇的积累上还要再接再厉;文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。

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So great is the pressure people suffer every day, that we are becoming increasing anxious and can no longer lead a peaceful life. We are disturbed by a variety of troubles—the trouble with study, the trouble with work, and the trouble with love. It seems that there are so many things amiss that we can’t keep a good mood at all. However, I believe that we must keep a good mood no matter how hard it is. Here are some reasons why it is significant to be in a good mood. First, a bad mood will certainly do harm to your health. A recent survey has revealed that people with bad mood are more likely to fall ill. In contrast, a good mood is quite beneficial to people’s health. Next, keeping a good mood makes you charming and attractive. People prefer those who are always cheerful and delighted rather than those who draw a long face all day long. Wear a smile and you will find yourself are easily accepted by others. Moreover, your emotion also has an effect on people around you. Therefore you ought to keep a good mood so as not to affect others in a negative way. Last, instability of you mood can make it difficult for you to concentrate on work. As consequence, the working efficiency will be slower than usual. I can’t conclude this article with several kernels of advice: try to be positive and energetic as long as possible; just speak out when you feel unpleasant or upset; release the negative feelings instead of burying them in your heart; get rid of bad temper if you have any. To which I’d only add: smile when there is sunshine.

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