2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

请作者在词汇丰富度，尤其是在学术词汇的积累上再接再厉；能够使用一些简单的从句；文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构。

People is increasingly use computer ,it's inadequate in our lives. Their I have some oppinions to computer's useful. Certainly ,it's conspicious that computer enhance our quality of life ,and we can as quickly as acquire the information ,make us follow the step of outside.what's more is good for our study,computer give us so many ways and information to improve our ability . But,coin have two sides ,computer also,it's have some bad influence on our teenagers or say young students,some student expenditure their money to computer games and addicted to computer games and lose their study. General to say.computer have changed our life ,and it cannot deny that computer is useful.