2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达，但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；若增加一些从句的使用，文章会取得更好的成绩；文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构。

People increasingly use computers,it's inadequate in our lives. Their I have some opinions to computer's useful. Certainly ,it's conspicuous that computer enhance our quality of life ,and we can as quickly as acquire the information ,make us follow the step of era,what's more is good for our study,computer gives us so many ways and information to improve our ability . But,coin has two sides ,computer also,it's have some bad influence on our teenagers or say young students,some student expenditure their money to computer games and addicted to computer games and lose their study. General to say.computer has changed our life ,and it cannot deny that computer is useful.