题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
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On maintaining trust between persons are inadequate, it's crucial of people's contact. No matter what student,teacher,doctor or trader need trust each other,but we could not blind to trust anyone. Nowadays,persons are suspicious and would not trust anyone because of the cheat,but we should believe that more decent persons .So we should keep maintaining trust between each other. And concrete to say,only maintaining trust led us make really friends and more.