2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者应适量增加从句的使用量；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用；请作者加强词汇表达的灵活性，但文中有较多拼写错误。

In this morden sociaty ,computer has become a important part of the human life .or you can say human cannot live the computer even one seconed .this hgih tech has resist deeply .they use computer every day to handle thier work in computer ,to shopping online ,to search resolve the relative question in the compter .so computer become a essential assistance in thier daily life . nowsday working at company has been a old say ,as we have computer we can work at home instead of work at the company its more casual and convenient.secondly ,we don't need to shopping in a large store in the lagre shoppping ceter because we have computer ,we can shopping on line is more handy to us ,it can save money and time .last but not least ,when we have a quetion we can ask google or baidu ,it is a prevalent of student ,they can get thier answer at once ,or we can resolve the problem ,finding the effective way . All in all the computer realy have an great influece on us .when we have it means we did live in the morden life ,it makes our life more woderful and convenience ,led us have more choose .cmputer and human become a good friend .